Ron: The idea of responsibilities and expectation works well, good use of concepts and composition. Good sound use.
Samuel: Interesting idea & Good story.
Bruno: Thrilling music helps the film forward. Add voice.
1 to 1 with Ron:
Ron’s feedback and suggestions were very useful, he said narration is suitable for story, 3D process needs backup for safety. Setting up is main problem however animation process is more digestible. Render early as you can.
Samuel: Much more straight to point than previous one. Nice Colour use.
Bruno: Good use of colour metaphors. Some scenes audio not very clear.
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