Sylvie Feedback:
- Look into stylised animation
- Make an animatic and start animation practice.
- Try to make tiger very stylised and simple.
Peer Feedback (Assessment):
Sonya:
- Lovely story and very ambitious.
- What type of sound will you have?
- What software will you use?
Bruno:
- Perfect concept, looking forward!
Samuel:
- Isn’t this concept too long for minor film?
- Great ideas.
- Very interesting concept.
Sylvie Feedback:
- Start animatic and experiment.
- Time running need to start animating now.
Peer Feedback:
Sonya:
- Need animatic, good concept.
- Think about sound?
Bruno:
- Film executes message well in a less obvious way.
Samuel:
- Think about sound and make animatic.
Sylvie Feedback:
- Film is too ambitious for minor project, is this possible in your circumstance?
- Try experimental instead?
- Think and come up with a short film.
Peer Feedback:
Bruno:
- Story has a deep message that is executed in the simplest yet impactful way.
- Understandable for new audience.
- Very rewatchable concept
- Great hidden meaning elements.
Sylvie Feedback:
- Look into a student (name recommended by Sylvie) who has done a film that is experimental and is war based.
- If the subject of animation is War sequence and Sea battle, then focus on dynamics and depth eg use above + under water.
Sylvie Feedback:
Animatic 1:
- Look into stylised drawings by Sisyphus by Jankovics as inspiration for Lion drawing.
- First establish that the seeds / eye are native to the rock.
- Establish that the seeds are also eyes.
- Bring the lion as a surprise, make him kill the seeds cruelly.
- Establish that the rock diminishes each time the lion throws seeds away.
- Establish that the seeds keep birthing on the rock.
- Select a style and do more animatic (less rough) and style frame.
- Draw without border included.
Animatic 2:
Sylvie Feedback:
- Try to draw bit more clearly
- How does tiger and boy have a bond, isn’t a tiger meant to be scary?
- What’s overall message?
- Does film fit the timing?
- Maybe tiger can have a magic power to shrink?
- Maybe use the eyes of Tiger instead of animating whole tiger, more effective.
- What makes a boy feel like underwater world is his home?
- What elements of a tiger are relatable to the boy historically and culturally?
Peer Feedback (Assessment) :
Bruno:
- Finish animatic.
- Think about sound.
- Great hidden concept that’s rewatchable
- What software?
Samuel:
- What software?
- Is it possible to finish movie?
- Does the film fit in timing for minor project?
- Finish Animatic.
Samuel:
- Looks good
- Nice sound and very interesting
- maybe make a positive ending